feedback me on design #29027954 and #29027955 , thanks

please provide your valuable feedback on my design #29034365 .

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Hello!

Glad to have the opportunity to participate in your contest. Please take a look at my design #29034650.
Is there anything you would like to improve or work out another concept for you? I'll do anything you want for you.

Best regards!

Thank you!

Sir, please check my design #29036120 and feedback, please. Thank you.