feedback me on design #29113431 and #29113432 , thanks

hello sir,
please check my design, #29114928, #29114929.
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Possible feedback on my design

please provide your valuable feedback on my design #29110748 , #29118125 , #29118416 , #29118417 and #29118418 .

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feedback please!