Have a few people involved in the decision-making. Have extended deadline to Nov. 8th. However, we have an agreement that we'd like a little more emphasis on the word "Thunder" and the word "Patriot" can be smaller. PLUS, this is a modification: We'd like to add a subtitle that says "I am the THUNDER". Can add an exclamation mark at the end of the phrase if you think that looks better, but not required. Thanks.

That added subtitle can also be all in CAPS if you think that is a better design. Thanks again.

Kindly provide your feedback on my design

Will do as soon as possible. I have everyone reviewing.