Please check my work and give feedback. Thanks (#29526333)

hi sir please check my design #29529031,, feedback please i will wait for your feedback thank you

Hi,
Provide feedback to this design #29530205.
Also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me.

#29530205
Thanks

Hello There,
Would you give me some valuable feedback on my design here: #29558042 & #29558043??
So I know my design quality is close to what you are looking for from this contest.
Thanks in advance :)

Warm Regards,
Fatboy Graphic