please check my submission #29578228 and feedback please

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29580655). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.

Dear Contest Holder,
I've submited my logo concept at design number #29581846. Please kindly check it out and I would be very happy if you would like to provide feedback so I know your opinion and can provide revisions if needed as soon as possible.
Thank You :)

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Please provide feedback on my design..

feedback please

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks.!

Hello please feedback on my submission (#29608000)