please check my design #29711428 feedback please, Thank you

Dear Contest Holder,
I've submited my logo concept at design number #29719342. Please kindly check it out and I would be very happy if you would like to provide feedback so I know your opinion and can provide revisions if needed as soon as possible.
Thank You :)

Regards,

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks.!

hello
how are you?
any feedback so far ?
any feedback will be very appreciated

thank you
best regards
b0jat

hello
how are you?
any feedback so far ?
any feedback will be very appreciated

thank you
best regards
b0jat