feedback me on my submitted design 29783888 and 29783889 , thanks

Hi, Project Owner!

I have submitted my design #29784833 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Adeliow

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29785631). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.