If you have any thoughts or changes to my submission, I would love to make adjustments to better my chances of helping you get what you are looking for.

feedback, please on my submission designs #30141894 and #30141894, thanks

Really like both your designs. I think we may need to change font however. Something simpler to the image I attached. Great job

Are you saying find a different font that is Script but also make the image simpler?