feedback, please on my submission designs #30165549, #30165550 thanks

I would like it a litte more clean and easy to take in. Think that I would like to put it on facebook aswell as on a t-shirt, a hoodie or on a cap. I really like that you ask for feedback.

please feedback in the design message box, not publically. I am ready to give my best effort. thanks

please check this #30166037

Please check my design #30169660 and please give me your valuable feedback. Thank you so much.

plz chq #30180697

plz chq #30180780 also