please check my design #30193320 feedback please, Thank you

Hi, Natalie Conklin!

I have submitted my design #30194041 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Adeliow

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #30197291). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED