Please provide feedback on my new label design. This one have creative storytelling. This one has a far good storytelling than the last ones. Thank You

Hello, Have a good day...
any feedback sir?
Can I help you anymore!!
waiting for your precious decision.
Regards

Hello Sir/Mam more than two week time has ran out there is no update regarding the contest. If you are still not satisfied with any design in the contest, let me submit a label with a creative freedom making it with my own choices. Like you have said you need a serious label so it will not look like a fun to eat thing but it can be made luxurious like cadbury dairymilk.

A winner has been selected, thanks for your contributions

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Hellos! Just checking to see if you got the comments that we received from our partners? I am in the office for the rest of the week and very keen to close. Many thanks in advance!