Can I have a feedback on my proposition?

Thanks

Hi,

- What should be the exact text in logo?

- Can you kindly make payment guarantee to receive quality design options.

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Thank you

Regards,
Faisal

the text should be just the company name:

Hi there.
What are the chances for you to commit to this project by making the payment guaranteed ?
Regards,
Andy D.
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