I'd greatly appreciate your thoughts on the design I submitted. Any feedback you could provide would be incredibly helpful for me to improve and refine it further. Thank you

Dear Sir/s I am submitting my design concept for you, this is a rough design, my artist is improving another drawing also, So, if you are going to finalize with me, pls mention your comments and suggestions,

Thanking you.
NILANTHA.

Dear Sir/s, I am re-submitting cover design removing too busy looking in my previous version, if you seem meet your idea, give me a positive feedback and your suggestions, I always hope your suggestions and amendments.

Thanking you.
NILANTHA