feedback me on my submitted design 32165257 , 32165258 and 32165259 . thanks

Hello,
I have submitted a new design.
Please check the design.
Thank you.

Please provide your valuable feedback on my design.(#4059786)
Thank you.

Hello,

Good day, I submitted a design proposal for you.
If you dont mind please kindly check my design and
leave a feedback if you have so i can provide a revision asap.
Thank you

Best regards,
BS Studio