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Hi, thank you all very much for your prompt design submission and efforts. I tried to comment as I went along reviewing it, but the Design Crowd website is not very easy to flick between. Unfortunately, there was no stand out design, only one was slightly interesting to me, Design 33773274.
My comments are below, if you require further feedback, please let me know. Thank you again.

Designer PB
Design 33773280 – too heavily contrasted and busy
Design #33773273 – bland and I just feel that something is not quite right about it, sorry I can’t describe better
Design 33773274 – is probably the closest to the feel that I’m after. However, it has a feel of a telephone book about it
Design 33773277 – is quite bland and feels ok, just feels a boring design
Design 33773275 – has a Thai feel massage to it, which isn’t what I do. However, the services bar is ok.
Design 33773276 – has a feel of a European travel company, not what I do

Designer SBSS
Design 33763740 – just a very standard design and not exciting at all
Design 33763739 – has a Chinese massage feel to it, which is not what I do. If I did do that, it would be very nice. But totally the wrong audience.

Designer vyasarajs
Design 33764742 – has a very medical feel to it, not what I’m after at all

Designer Starlyn DS
Design 33761695 – this has a feel of business being in China/Japan/Korea and if I identified as such and my target audience identified as such. This is all wrong.

Designer Javelin Studio
Sorry, this design looks and feels like a Pilates studio

Hi designers, I have not had any response to my feedback to your designs. Please let me know what questions you have. Here is some further feedback.
Landing page: a good hero, must have healthy, happy feel to the image - this is an example, https://dcassetcdn.com/design_img/4079531/30934/33773274/xkvp9q4gtq1pd68gq1yc1ypk14_image.jpg Can be nature, can be person. Image can be different. Please feel free to use any image from my website or social media.

Menu bar: traditional for example: https://dcassetcdn.com/design_img/4079531/30934/33773273/xwmxmvx4v13rg4mdcxpqc1dh09_image.jpg Please keep back ground white, please do not use colour gradation.

Less curves - I don’t mind curves as opposed to straight lines, but not the whole landing page to be filled with this.

Less logo placement – I am only a sole business in a small town and my logo is unknown, it does not need to be placed in multiple places on the landing page to build brand awareness.

Colour – my preference is for clean lines, clean feel to the landing page. Please make it less busy. Please keep with the ethos of a natural, healthy, aligned and balance tone to the design.

Please let me know if you have any further question. Thank you.

Working on the changes and will send soon, thanks

Thank you.