feedback me on design 33821642 and 33821643 , thanks

Dear Project Owner,

I have submitted my designs.
Please feedback and tell me if I'm on the right track.

Best regards!
Filip

Greetings, it would be very helpful to all the designers if you provide what worked for the design and you want to see more of it or just what didn't work and why you eliminated the submission. It will greatly impact further designs submissions and you will only see the kind of designs that you would probably like.

Thank you & Best Regards.