Hi Sir please provide some feedback on my designs.
Thanks.

Thankyou, everyone for your design entries. In reflection, I think the mock designs I provided for this contest weren’t particularly good (sorry). Some additional details that might be helpful… I would like the words "Relational" and "Experiential" to be written the same size (equal emphasis). I am open to designs with the graphic above and text below, or the graphic to the left and text to the right. Ideally, I want the graphic to communicate connection, positive experience, and growth.... although it is super hard to get one small graphic to do all of this... alternatively the graphic might focus on just positive connection (ie stylised figures connecting), or just focus on the theme of growth (eg a lotus or a tree or a leaf). I am open to all ideas, and I am leaning towards a more formal looking design for this project. I hope this helps. I am grateful for your efforts. Kind regards, Rom.