feedback me on design #36037070 , regards

Please feedback on Design #36038638. regards.

Hi there,
I’ve just submitted two designs concepts for your project (ID: #36049540 & #36049590). It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the descriptions, where I’ve shared the ideas and thought process behind each concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick