New design #37625613

Any feedback any changes sir?

Greetings designers! We’ve seen several amazing designs here but they’re not QUITE what we’re looking for, though they have helped us realize exactly what we want! Please have a look at our lastest project upload, it’s a version we did by hand which is the exact style and feel we want. If you are willing, please take another try with this direction (prompts have been updated too) and create for us a refined, nicely balanced version of our handmade drawing. We’d really like to see some options with outlines, shadows, and both. Thank you all for your great work and help designing our perfect logo!

Would like to get your views on my concept.