hello. Any news regarding my last revision for your logo design? Kind Regards, Vlad

I like the concept but feel it looks somewhat cartoonish and less refined than a few other designs I like. Do you have any ideas to make it look better? or even a completely different design? 

hello. Do you have any news regarding my submitted design? I look forward your reply. thank you, Vlad

Hi sir,

I'm submitted design for your brief if you want any changes feedback me.

Thanks,

MK

Hi ...I see you've extended so assuming my design isn't being considered.
could you please eliminate and/or give feedback?
Thanks!