With all due respect, the cell part does not communicate anything to me, so I'm not sure that's the best choice to go with. Perhaps you would consider a complete logo re-design. I do not want to offend anyone, I just want clients to get the best possible end product for their money.

Hi there I have just submitted a design. If you have the time I would love some feedback so I can improve the design.
Thanks :)
Dee

I got this,

Hey I submitted a frist draft. I wasn't a huge fan of the way the Cell currently was so I changed it a bit.

Let me know what you think and any changes you need :)

Jack

Some feedback, Please... good or bad, both are welcome...
Thank you