Can i have feedback on my proposal?

Thanks

Shino

Hi Dany,

I just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you provide feedback on this ?

Thanks in advance for your assessment, I'm still at your disposition for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Thank you for the invite. I've just submitted my first design and if you need any refinement let me know. I would rely appreciate your feedback. Thank you.
Zorica