sorry, I made mistake in my last works. I've corrected next works

hy there,
i uploaded a design, if you have the time send me a feedback

Regards,
Mikka

Hello,
can you please provide me with some feedback on my design?
Thanks very much.

feedback?

Can You please provide me with feedback on the revised designs? Thanks very kindly.

plz feedback

Hello,
any feedback on the recent revisions??