Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

Dear,

I can not see your design .....:(

Hello there, hope you are doing well with the contest here.

Worked on a concept described briefly inside the submission. Would love to hear any thoughts you might have on it.

Kind Regards,

hi sir waiting for your feedback

Hello,
Give some feedback.
thanks.

hi sir im sanding my design file waiting for your feedback