Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

Dear Mr Gill

Please advise on the size you would like the Business card to be exactly. Some clients like a slightly bigger card. I have made up a mock design which I just need to re-size, before I send it to you to coincide with your requirements. The idea behind the first design will be to see whether I am on the right track.

Kind regards

Priscilla Meintjes
South Africa.

hi sir any feedback pls sir