Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

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Joy Setiawan

Hi, can you please give feedback, I've sent you my design logo. Thank you

Hi, can you please give feedback, I've sent you my design logo. Thank you

Hi, can you please give feedback, I've sent you my design logo. Thank you
sidras

sir I am keen interested to get feedback,please give it to me.

sir please please please feedback.

sir please please feedback.