no cast yet, use temp names

Any feedback/wishes regarding my design?

Would you happen to have any character descriptions?

dear sir,
my work need your feedback - Design #4810249
don't worry about stocks

thanks
Budie

25, blonde with a pale complexion

Sir please provide feedback and one more thing i wud like to tell that i have used a imaginary name as well i have took a random bottom line from another poster

Sir please provide feedback @ Design id: 4817091,Design id: 4793494 and Design id: 4817153

Hi there, any feedback on my design, happy to make revisions.