feedback please

Hey Guys, Looking good so far. Within the next 48 hours, I will be rating again and selecting the potential winning designs. I appreciate the hard work and look forward to seeing the revisions and new designs! Thanks, Jamey

Hello Guys, Very nice work! Tonight I will giving 6-7 designs the top rating for final revisions and selection. Thanks for your hard work and let''s bring this one home! Thanks, Jamey

What about my design sir? Please give me feedback.