Hi SIR/Madam:)
Can you check my attempt and feedback please ..
Thanks in advance

DInesh

Hi,

Please consider guaranteeing payment to attract more numerous and higher-quality submissions.

Design id: 4917667, can you please revise mine! :)

Hi Chris,

I've just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you please provide me some feedback ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your service for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul