Can You provide me some feedback, please?
Best regards!

Did you get a chance to read the business brief that was attached to the project request? We were looking for something that communicated the open road (thought I did like the sun you included), but instead maybe integrated a rock and roll tour bus, communicated luxury, music and travel. I didn't like the font you used, it felt very baseball logo-ish, though some of the packages we're offering ARE baseball packages. Thanks again for your time and effort!