Hello,

I have submitted a design, could you give me some feedback please. This will help me to be in the right direction and i can provide you with more design ideas.

Thanks

JLG Studios

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@JLG Studios : Thanks for the submission.  I have been thinking about the design all day.  I think it captures a lot of the elements that I am looking for.  There are a few elements that I think could be improved, but I might have a hard time articulating them.  I will try.

The first relates to the font.  I think a simpler, less-stylized font would work better from a legibility standpoint.  Some of the letters have a lot of width (lowercase e), and I think that affects the legibility.

The second thought I have is harder for me to explain.  I think the square image works better than the banner.  The curve at the bottom gives the square image a sense of depth that the banner lacks.  In the square image, it looks like the screenshot is floating in-front of the background.  There is not as much of that same sense from the banner. 

I do like the background.  I think the blue color compliments the orange in the logo, and I think it adds a professional feel.  I am not sure what to suggest.  Maybe a fading blur on the background, maybe adjust the screenshot in the banners so that the edges don't meet the edge of the image, I don't know.  Of course, those could be horrible suggestions, I apologize.  I have a hard time articulating what I am thinking.

And one final suggestion.  I like how the waveform in the background has a certain glow to it.  Would it be possible to mimic this with the "click to discover more" button?  Perhaps fading the edges to soften the button?  Like I said, this could be another bad suggestion.

Again, thank you so much for your submission. 

@EasyWeb Technologies : Feel free to submit some rough samples or ask me for more clarification.  I will be happy to discuss things further on this website.

Thank You for the feedback, it helps me make the design better and be in the right direction.
I will go ahead and make the changes and upload a revised design.


Thank You

JLG Studios