Update to brief: 1. Title needs to be "Disintermediating Commercial Mortgage Backed Securitization (CMBS)'' 2. Change ''Before'' and ''After'' to ''Current Lending'' and ''Marketplace Lending'' 3. Show the flow from Package to Tranche as the creation of CMBS products. Maybe show an extra dotted arrow with a ''CMBS'' label? 4. The ''Package'' picture look should look like a 3D box to symbolise a pooling of loans. 5. Between ''Super Fund'' and ''Investors'' can this look like three 3D packages instead of money. This symbolise different products being sold to investors. 6. Rename ''Super Fund'' to ''Mutual Fund''. 7. The borrower should symbolise a corporation owning a $10m building. Make the borrower look like a business owner. Need a picture of an office building with the words ''collatoral property'' See this for an example: http://www.orix.co.jp/servicer/e/service/cmbs.htm