LYMPHAVILLA [PT 2] - LYMPHEDEMA TREATMENT CLINIC/LUXURY SPA

Hier ist was LYMPHAVILLA suchte für sein logo design.

UPDATE: I increase the value of each winning design and added a 3rd place. ANY SMALL DETAIL IS VALUED - ALSO IF YOU ARE ABLE TO EXPERTLY SHOWCASE HOW I CAN CENTER THE LYMPHAVILLA TEXT WITHOUT LOOKING ILL PAY YOU INDIVIDUALLY $150 outside the contest. GO!

Salve!
As we all know Rome wasn't built in a day. Similarly LYMPHAVILLA one-of-a-kind Lymphedema Treatment logo needs a bit more detail!
Thank you if you participated in the previous contest (Congrats to Rabica for winning).
Based on that design - I'd like to see what you got. I want roughly 70% of the logo to remain as is (by that I mean I want to keep the overall aesthetic and really I want to see if any creative ideas could be further infused. Please don't remake the logo completely - that is NOT what i'm looking for.
Ideas include (NOTE: I don't need all of it thrown together to be a success)
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+ The lettering feels like it's lacking something...maybe it's the positioning; maybe it needs a… Mehr lesen