Project Pure Quality; Retail packaging for handmade bar soap.

Hier ist was ein Geschäft in United States für sein packaging design vorgenommen hatte.

A clean design that conveys quality and affordable luxury. Wrapper material is 80 lb felt cover paper, used as a wrap around the product.

Attached is my idea. Logo is purchased. Unless you think it's terrible, maybe best is to refine what I have? I'm thinking fonts, proportions, etc. Honestly though, if you think it's bad we can start from scratch. I think it's good but I'm not that invested in it. I just want to sell good soap.
5 different fragrances, each identical packaging except the colored stripe and the scent name. Should the scent name be inside the colored stripe or above it?

Apologies for the non-metric:
Soap is 3" tall and 2-13/16" wide and 1" deep.
Front of label is 2-5/16" tall and 2-13/16" wide.
Label (wrap) is 8-1/2" long

Looking forward to hearing from you guys. Mehr lesen