Just submitted two concepts based on the description. Would like to know your thoughts on them.

Best Regards,

Sir, thank you for the invitation to work on your new logo - would love to get your feedback on my design to see if this is the sort of look you wanted or if there is anything specific you'd like to see or change.

Regards,
Craig

Hi there, please let me know your thougths about my job. Cheers,

i just submit mine, some feedback would be nice..

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