Hello I had fun created this design for you, If you have any feedback or corrections for me that would be great! Thanks

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Hello I would like some feedback so I can make adjustments to my design if you do not like it. Thanks

Hi there,

Thank you so much for your design submission. It is a great start. I do have some feedback for revisions that I'd like to propose.

1st. The baby has 2 features that I would like to see adjusted. The hair should be a little less pronounced. At the moment it is very pronounced. Perhaps just a bald baby wouldn't be so bad? Second, the amount of darkness in the eye area is slightly overwhelming. If we could see just a bit more detail I think it would make the 'demonic' look go away.

2nd. I like the starburst effect. Lets get rid of the circle that is surrounding the design completely and let the starburst fade out.

3rd. The icons for the man and woman can go away. I definitely understand what you were going for but I just don't think its necessary.

4th. This is the most change difficult to describe is the font - I would like to see it integrated into the design. It shouldn't stand on the side of the design, it should really compliment it. I don't feel that the font that is currently being used is effective. Lets swing again.

I know this is quite the laundry list - I appreciate your design already and look forward to seeing the changes if you decide to do them.

Thanks so much

Thom Strimbu

Hello Thom,

I will make all the changes you requested and have a revised version for you within the next day. thanks for getting back to me I appreciate it.

Ross