Can i have feedback on my logo proposition?

Thanks

Hi Armir, thanks for your submission. Whilst I do like the logo I think it''s a little too orientated towards marine, it needs to incorporate more of a mechanical / engine type theme, whilst incorporate the marine theme. The DP needs to be more prominent, but I do like the way you have looped the DP together. Colours are OK, maybe incorporate something a little brighter? Look forward to the next revision. Cheers.

Follow new one please.
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Hi there.
What are the chances for you to commit to this project by making the payment guaranteed ?
Regards,
Andy
Clickseffect.com

Follow last two versions please.

@Andy Dollinger: Fair chance I will, but I have to run designs past my client first, so I don''t have the final say if they like any of them or not. 

Committed to payment.

Any suggestion to improve more mt proposition?