feedback me on design #35689372 , regards

Dear Please Check my designs
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I hope you like them
Thank you

Hello!
I’ve submitted my concept (Entry #35690067) based on your design brief. I truly hope it aligns with your vision..
I’d be really grateful if you could take a moment to share your feedback — and if it feels close to what you're looking for, and rating my work would be truly appreciated.
Thank you so much for your time!