feedback me on design #36722534 , regards

Hi there Project Owner kindly Feedback my entries. Thank You!

Hi there,

Your opinion matters. Among 100+ entries, Design Id #36724025 and #36722977 are my strategic take on your brief.
One honest thought from you can turn a strong concept into the *right* one.
What works, and what would you change?

All the best,
Leti from Amduat Design